Apply PX feedback

Author: michaelryanpeter

snippets/olmv0-and-v1-rn-np-support.adoc

@@ -8,11 +8,11 @@
 
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-In {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z}, {olmv0-first} and {olmv1} support the inclusion of network policy manifests in the resource bundles of Operators. Tailored network policies protect against data leaks and harden against many attack vectors on {product-title} clusters.
+In {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z}, {olmv0-first} and {olmv1} support the inclusion of network policy manifests in the resource bundles of Operators. These tailored network policies protect against data leaks and harden against many attack vectors on {product-title} clusters.
 
 [IMPORTANT]
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-In order to update or install an Operator that includes network policy manifests, you must first update to {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream} or later.
+If you try to update or install an Operator that includes a tailored network policy and your OLM version does not support network policies, you receive a notification. An insights rule in the CLI or web console alerts you to update to  {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream} or later.
 ====
 
-For more information, see link:https://access.redhat.com/articles/7133113[Operators shipping with network policies may require OCP cluster upgrade before they can be upgraded (Red Hat Knowledgebase)].
+For more information, including the planned timeline for releasing Red Hat-provided Operators with tailored network policies, see link:https://access.redhat.com/articles/7133113[Operators shipping with network policies may require OCP cluster upgrade before they can be upgraded (Red Hat Knowledgebase)].

snippets/olmv0-rn-np-support.adoc

@@ -11,11 +11,11 @@
 
 :_mod-docs-content-type: SNIPPET
 
-In {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream}, {olmv0-first} supports the inclusion of network policy manifests in the resource bundles of Operators. Tailored network policies protect against data leaks and harden against many attack vectors on {product-title} clusters.
+In {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream}, {olmv0-first} supports the inclusion of network policy manifests in the resource bundles of Operators. These tailored network policies protect against data leaks and harden against many attack vectors on {product-title} clusters.
 
 [IMPORTANT]
 ====
-In order to update or install an Operator that includes network policy manifests, you must first update to {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z} or later.
+If you try to update or install an Operator that includes a tailored network policy and your OLM version does not support network policies, you receive a notification. An insights rule in the CLI or web console alerts you to update to  {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream} or later.
 ====
 
-For more information, see link:https://access.redhat.com/articles/7133113[Operators shipping with network policies may require OCP cluster upgrade before they can be upgraded (Red Hat Knowledgebase)].
+For more information, including the planned timeline for releasing Red Hat-provided Operators with tailored network policies, see link:https://access.redhat.com/articles/7133113[Operators shipping with network policies may require OCP cluster upgrade before they can be upgraded (Red Hat Knowledgebase)].