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| 1 | +# OpenShift Documentation PR Review Assessment |
| 2 | + |
| 3 | +**PR Number:** [#103700](https://github.com/openshift/openshift-docs/pull/103700) |
| 4 | +**JIRA Issue:** [OBSDOCS-1605](https://issues.redhat.com/browse/OBSDOCS-1605) |
| 5 | +**Author:** max-cx |
| 6 | +**Review Date:** December 10, 2025 |
| 7 | +**Reviewer:** Automated Review System |
| 8 | + |
| 9 | +--- |
| 10 | + |
| 11 | +## Executive Summary |
| 12 | + |
| 13 | +**Overall Recommendation:** ✅ **APPROVE** |
| 14 | + |
| 15 | +This PR adds IBM Cloud Object Storage configuration details to the distributed tracing Tempo reference table. The change is minimal, well-structured, and passes all technical requirements. The PR is ready to merge. |
| 16 | + |
| 17 | +**Estimated Fix Time:** 0 minutes (no fixes required) |
| 18 | + |
| 19 | +--- |
| 20 | + |
| 21 | +## Complete Criteria Checklist |
| 22 | + |
| 23 | +| # | Criteria | Status | Details | |
| 24 | +|---|----------|--------|---------| |
| 25 | +| 1 | Verify PR has only 1 commit | ✅ PASS | Single commit: `e4ace9a24dd5c8d76bc5776a2d00625aa179ec16` | |
| 26 | +| 2 | Verify PR has QE approval, if required | ✅ PASS | QE approval confirmed in PR description (checkbox marked) | |
| 27 | +| 3 | Must have an empty line between H1 heading and first paragraph | ✅ PASS | File is a snippet with table content only, no H1 heading present | |
| 28 | +| 4 | Must be an empty line between include statements | ✅ PASS | No include statements in this file | |
| 29 | +| 5 | No H3 headings (===) in any files | ✅ PASS | No H3 headings found | |
| 30 | +| 6 | No additional text surrounding links in additional resources sections | ✅ PASS | No additional resources section present | |
| 31 | +| 7 | No floating .Headings unless above example/table/figure | ✅ PASS | ID anchor is properly associated with table element | |
| 32 | +| 8 | Modules must follow concept/procedure/reference format | ✅ PASS | This is a SNIPPET, not a module | |
| 33 | +| 9 | All modules and assemblies include one H1 and short description | ✅ PASS | This is a SNIPPET with proper content type declaration | |
| 34 | +| 10 | All files follow mod docs templates | ✅ PASS | Snippet includes `:_mod-docs-content-type: SNIPPET` | |
| 35 | +| 11 | All conversations must be resolved | ✅ PASS | No unresolved review threads | |
| 36 | +| 12 | Procedure modules strictly follow template | ✅ PASS | Not applicable (this is a snippet, not a procedure) | |
| 37 | +| 13 | Scan preview for proper rendering | ✅ PASS | All elements render correctly | |
| 38 | +| 14 | Scan text for obvious typos or poor wording | ✅ PASS | No typos or wording issues detected | |
| 39 | +| 15 | Verify that all links work | ✅ PASS | No new external links added | |
| 40 | +| 16 | Check that there are no xrefs in modules | ✅ PASS | No xrefs present in snippet | |
| 41 | +| 17 | Check that xrefs use proper syntax | ✅ PASS | No xrefs to validate | |
| 42 | +| 18 | Check headings contain only alphanumeric and spaces | ✅ PASS | Table heading follows conventions | |
| 43 | +| 19 | Check all system tests have passed | ✅ PASS | openshift-ci bot confirms "all tests passed!" | |
| 44 | + |
| 45 | +--- |
| 46 | + |
| 47 | +## File-by-File Analysis |
| 48 | + |
| 49 | +### snippets/distr-tracing-tempo-required-secret-parameters.adoc |
| 50 | + |
| 51 | +**File Type:** SNIPPET |
| 52 | +**Lines Changed:** +10 additions, 0 deletions |
| 53 | +**Status:** ✅ PASS |
| 54 | + |
| 55 | +#### Structure Analysis |
| 56 | +- ✅ Proper content type declaration: `:_mod-docs-content-type: SNIPPET` |
| 57 | +- ✅ Proper ID anchor: `[id="required_secret_parameters_{context}"]` |
| 58 | +- ✅ Well-formed AsciiDoc table with header row |
| 59 | +- ✅ Consistent formatting with existing entries |
| 60 | + |
| 61 | +#### Content Added |
| 62 | +The PR adds a new table row for IBM Cloud Object Storage with the following parameters: |
| 63 | +``` |
| 64 | +|{ibm-cloud-object-storage} |
| 65 | +| |
| 66 | +`bucket: <tempo_bucket>` |
| 67 | +
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| 68 | +`endpoint: <ibm_bucket_endpoint>` |
| 69 | +
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| 70 | +`access_key_id: <ibm_bucket_access_key>` |
| 71 | +
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| 72 | +`access_key_secret: <ibm_bucket_secret_key>` |
| 73 | +``` |
| 74 | + |
| 75 | +#### Quality Assessment |
| 76 | +- ✅ Consistent with existing table entries (MinIO, Amazon S3, Azure, GCP) |
| 77 | +- ✅ Uses proper AsciiDoc attribute for IBM Cloud Object Storage name |
| 78 | +- ✅ Parameter names follow established naming conventions |
| 79 | +- ✅ Placeholder values use appropriate angle bracket notation |
| 80 | +- ✅ No unnecessary comments or documentation links (appropriate for this storage provider) |
| 81 | + |
| 82 | +#### Technical Validation |
| 83 | +- ✅ Table syntax is correct (proper cell delimiters) |
| 84 | +- ✅ No markdown formatting issues |
| 85 | +- ✅ Backticks properly used for inline code |
| 86 | +- ✅ Line breaks appropriately placed for readability |
| 87 | + |
| 88 | +--- |
| 89 | + |
| 90 | +## Content Quality Assessment |
| 91 | + |
| 92 | +### Accuracy |
| 93 | +- Content copied from published OCP 4.18 documentation |
| 94 | +- Technical parameters are standard for IBM Cloud Object Storage authentication |
| 95 | +- Consistent with industry-standard S3-compatible storage configuration |
| 96 | + |
| 97 | +### Completeness |
| 98 | +- All required secret parameters for IBM Cloud Object Storage are included |
| 99 | +- Parameter set is appropriate and sufficient for Tempo integration |
| 100 | +- No missing critical configuration values |
| 101 | + |
| 102 | +### Consistency |
| 103 | +- Formatting matches existing table entries |
| 104 | +- Parameter naming conventions align with other storage providers |
| 105 | +- Uses established documentation patterns |
| 106 | + |
| 107 | +### Clarity |
| 108 | +- Parameter names are self-explanatory |
| 109 | +- Placeholder names clearly indicate their purpose |
| 110 | +- No ambiguous or confusing content |
| 111 | + |
| 112 | +--- |
| 113 | + |
| 114 | +## CI/CD Validation |
| 115 | + |
| 116 | +### Test Results |
| 117 | +- ✅ **ci/prow/validate-asciidoc**: SUCCESS |
| 118 | +- ✅ **ci/prow/validate-portal**: SUCCESS |
| 119 | +- ✅ **Overall Test Status**: All tests passed |
| 120 | + |
| 121 | +### Build Status |
| 122 | +- Preview build completed successfully |
| 123 | +- Preview URL: [View Preview](https://103700--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/openshift-enterprise/latest/observability/distr_tracing/distr-tracing-tempo-installing#distr-tracing-tempo-object-storage-setup_distr-tracing-tempo-installing) |
| 124 | + |
| 125 | +--- |
| 126 | + |
| 127 | +## Review Status |
| 128 | + |
| 129 | +### Approvals |
| 130 | +- ✅ **Peer Review**: Approved by IshwarKanse (MEMBER) on 2025-12-10 at 05:50:32 UTC |
| 131 | +- ✅ **QE Review**: Approved (confirmed in PR description) |
| 132 | + |
| 133 | +### Conversations |
| 134 | +- No review threads present |
| 135 | +- No unresolved conversations |
| 136 | +- No pending feedback |
| 137 | + |
| 138 | +--- |
| 139 | + |
| 140 | +## Issues Found |
| 141 | + |
| 142 | +**None.** This PR meets all documentation standards and requirements. |
| 143 | + |
| 144 | +--- |
| 145 | + |
| 146 | +## Recommendations |
| 147 | + |
| 148 | +### Immediate Actions |
| 149 | +1. ✅ **Merge PR** - All criteria met, no blockers present |
| 150 | + |
| 151 | +### Future Considerations |
| 152 | +None. This is a straightforward addition with no architectural or process concerns. |
| 153 | + |
| 154 | +--- |
| 155 | + |
| 156 | +## Additional Notes |
| 157 | + |
| 158 | +### Context |
| 159 | +This PR addresses OBSDOCS-1605 by adding IBM Cloud Object Storage configuration details to the Tempo distributed tracing documentation. The content was sourced from the published OCP 4.18 documentation and applies to versions 4.12-4.21. |
| 160 | + |
| 161 | +### Scope |
| 162 | +The change is minimal and focused: |
| 163 | +- Single file modified (snippet) |
| 164 | +- Only additive changes (no deletions) |
| 165 | +- No impact on other documentation files |
| 166 | +- Self-contained table entry |
| 167 | + |
| 168 | +### Risk Assessment |
| 169 | +**Risk Level:** Very Low |
| 170 | +- Minor documentation enhancement |
| 171 | +- No code changes |
| 172 | +- No breaking changes to existing content |
| 173 | +- Isolated to single snippet file |
| 174 | + |
| 175 | +--- |
| 176 | + |
| 177 | +## Summary |
| 178 | + |
| 179 | +This PR successfully adds IBM Cloud Object Storage support documentation to the Tempo object storage reference table. All 19 review criteria have been satisfied, CI tests pass, and the content quality is high. The PR has received appropriate approvals and is ready for merge. |
| 180 | + |
| 181 | +**Final Recommendation:** ✅ **APPROVE AND MERGE** |
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