Apply TAM feedback and style considerations

- Lower flesh-kincaid score to an ideal 10-11 grade reading level
- Use parallel structure to help with i18n
- Use customer focus language over feature focus

Author: michaelryanpeter

snippets/olmv0-and-v1-rn-np-support.adoc

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ In {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z}, {olmv0-first} and {olmv1} suppo
 
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-An insights rule on `console.redhat.com` alerts you to update to {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream} or later, if the currently installed version of OLM does not support tailored network policies.
+If your current version of OLM does not support tailored network policies, a notification is displayed on console.redhat.com and the web console. Update to {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream} or later to enable OLM support for tailored network policies.
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 For more information, including the planned timeline for releasing Red Hat-provided Operators with tailored network policies, see link:https://access.redhat.com/articles/7133113[Operators shipping with network policies may require OCP cluster upgrade before they can be upgraded (Red Hat Knowledgebase)].

snippets/olmv0-rn-np-support.adoc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ In {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream}, {olmv0-first} supports t
 
 [TIP]
 ====
-An insights rule on `console.redhat.com` alerts you to update to {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream} or later, if the currently installed version of OLM does not support tailored network policies.
+If your current version of OLM does not support tailored network policies, a notification is displayed on console.redhat.com and the web console. Update to {product-title} {product-version}.{olm-np-z-stream} or later to enable OLM support for tailored network policies.
 ====
 
 For more information, including the planned timeline for releasing Red Hat-provided Operators with tailored network policies, see link:https://access.redhat.com/articles/7133113[Operators shipping with network policies may require OCP cluster upgrade before they can be upgraded (Red Hat Knowledgebase)].