Incorporate edits; remove stale query

Co-authored-by: Colleen Toporek <colleen_toporek@apple.com>

Author: amartini51

TSPL.docc/LanguageGuide/ControlFlow.md

@@ -1484,9 +1484,9 @@ The `for`-`in` loop above iterates over an array of tuples,
 binding the first and second elements of the tuples
 to the `x` and `y` constants.
 The statements inside the loop can use those constants,
-like the `if` statement that checks whether the point lies on the x-axis.
+such as the `if` statement that checks whether the point lies on the x-axis.
 A more concise way to write this code
-is to combine the value bindings and condition,
+is to combine the value bindings and condition
 using a `for`-`case`-`in` loop.
 The code below has the same behavior as the `for`-`in` loop above:
 
@@ -2074,8 +2074,6 @@ without wrapping it in an `else` block,
 and it lets you keep the code that handles a violated requirement
 next to the requirement.
 
-<!-- XXX show guard-case syntax for completeness? -->
-
 ## Deferred Actions
 
 Unlike control-flow constructs like `if` and `while`,

TSPL.docc/LanguageGuide/Enumerations.md

@@ -495,7 +495,7 @@ if case .qrCode(let productCode) = productBarcode {
 Just like in the switch statement earlier,
 the `productBarcode` variable is matched against
 the pattern `.qrCode(let productCode)` here.
-And like in the switch case,
+And as in the switch case,
 writing `let` extracts the associated value as a constant.
 For more information about `if`-`case` statements,
 see <doc:ControlFlow#Patterns>.
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ to give an enumeration an additional value,
 it's important to understand the difference between them.
 You pick the raw value for an enumeration case
 when you define that enumeration case in your code,
-like the three ASCII codes above.
+such as the three ASCII codes above.
 The raw value for a particular enumeration case is always the same.
 In contrast,
 you pick associated values when you create a new constant or variable