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[PotA] Fixed typos in Tinderstrike#312

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[PotA] Fixed typos in Tinderstrike#312
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This did include changing the ID so hopefully thats fine.

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There's lots of missing italics in these old files. It would be great, since you already touching on this file, if you could go through all of those cases and fix them. Though if you don't want to go through the whole file, it's fine as long as you at least fix that other case on the Fire Mastery line that i can't make a suggestion for.

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<li>You have resistance to fire damage.</li>
<li>You can cast dominate monster (save DC 17) on a fire elemental. Once you have done so, Tinderstrike can't be used this way again until the next dawn.</li>
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<li>You can cast dominate monster (save DC 17) on a fire elemental. Once you have done so, Tinderstrike can't be used this way again until the next dawn.</li>
<li>You can cast <i>dominate monster</i> (save DC 17) on a fire elemental. Once you have done so, <i>Tinderstrike</i> can't be used this way again until the next dawn.</li>

<element name="Tinkerstrike" type="Magic Item" source="Princes of the Apocalypse" id="ID_WOTC_POTA_MAGIC_ITEM_TINKERSTRIKE">
<element name="Tinderstrike" type="Magic Item" source="Princes of the Apocalypse" id="ID_WOTC_POTA_MAGIC_ITEM_TINDERSTRIKE">
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<p>A flint dagger, Tinderstrike is uncommonly sharp, and sparks cascade off its edge whenever it strikes something solid. Its handle is always warm to the touch, and the blade smolders for 1d4 minutes after it is used to deal damage. It contains a spark of Imix, Prince of Evil Fire.</p>
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<p>A flint dagger, Tinderstrike is uncommonly sharp, and sparks cascade off its edge whenever it strikes something solid. Its handle is always warm to the touch, and the blade smolders for 1d4 minutes after it is used to deal damage. It contains a spark of Imix, Prince of Evil Fire.</p>
<p>A flint dagger, <i>Tinderstrike</i> is uncommonly sharp, and sparks cascade off its edge whenever it strikes something solid. Its handle is always warm to the touch, and the blade smolders for 1d4 minutes after it is used to deal damage. It contains a spark of Imix, Prince of Evil Fire.</p>

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there's another example of this same issue on the line 244 (Fire Mastery)

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<p class="indent"><strong><em>Dance of the All-Consuming Fire.</em></strong> While inside a fire node, you can perform a ritual called the Dance of the All-Consuming Fire, using Tinderstrike to create a devastation orb of Are (see the devastation orb description for the time and cost of the ritual). Once you perform the ritual, Tinderstrike can't be used to perform the ritual again until the next dawn.</p>
<p class="indent"><strong><em>Dance of the All-Consuming Fire.</em></strong> While inside a fire node, you can perform a ritual called the Dance of the All-Consuming Fire, using Tinderstrike to create a devastation orb of fire (see the devastation orb description for the time and cost of the ritual). Once you perform the ritual, Tinderstrike can't be used to perform the ritual again until the next dawn.</p>
<p class="indent"><strong><em>Flaw.</em></strong> Tinderstrike makes its wielder impatient and rash. While attuned to the weapon, you gain the following flaw: "I act without thinking and take risks without weighing the consequences."</p>
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<p class="indent"><strong><em>Flaw.</em></strong> Tinderstrike makes its wielder impatient and rash. While attuned to the weapon, you gain the following flaw: "I act without thinking and take risks without weighing the consequences."</p>
<p class="indent"><em><strong>Flaw.</strong> Tinderstrike</em> makes its wielder impatient and rash. While attuned to the weapon, you gain the following flaw: "I act without thinking and take risks without weighing the consequences."</p>

<li>You can cast dominate monster (save DC 17) on a fire elemental. Once you have done so, Tinderstrike can't be used this way again until the next dawn.</li>
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<p class="indent"><strong><em>Dance of the All-Consuming Fire.</em></strong> While inside a fire node, you can perform a ritual called the Dance of the All-Consuming Fire, using Tinderstrike to create a devastation orb of Are (see the devastation orb description for the time and cost of the ritual). Once you perform the ritual, Tinderstrike can't be used to perform the ritual again until the next dawn.</p>
<p class="indent"><strong><em>Dance of the All-Consuming Fire.</em></strong> While inside a fire node, you can perform a ritual called the Dance of the All-Consuming Fire, using Tinderstrike to create a devastation orb of fire (see the devastation orb description for the time and cost of the ritual). Once you perform the ritual, Tinderstrike can't be used to perform the ritual again until the next dawn.</p>
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<p class="indent"><strong><em>Dance of the All-Consuming Fire.</em></strong> While inside a fire node, you can perform a ritual called the Dance of the All-Consuming Fire, using Tinderstrike to create a devastation orb of fire (see the devastation orb description for the time and cost of the ritual). Once you perform the ritual, Tinderstrike can't be used to perform the ritual again until the next dawn.</p>
<p class="indent"><strong><em>Dance of the All-Consuming Fire.</em></strong> While inside a fire node, you can perform a ritual called the Dance of the All-Consuming Fire, using <i>Tinderstrike</i> to create a <i>devastation orb of fire</i> (see the <i>devastation orb</i> description for the time and cost of the ritual). Once you perform the ritual, <i>Tinderstrike</i> can't be used to perform the ritual again until the next dawn.</p>

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